visually this is amazing...made me think of the letters we have on front of our fridge and playing with the boys teaching them to write...very nice one shot!
so im a bit behind in my replys huh ;-) thank you all for taking the time to comment it is greatly appreciated as always ty Beachanny Claudia im glad you enjoyed Glynn ahh but glyn if i waz a magition id find spellin so much eazier ;-) dustus thank you for the wb i wasnt so much away as non responsive ;-) SuziCate thank you for your kind words KB hmm tone ... that i think is a missing element we will have to include in the future for a "complete" sensory piece Brian Miller thank you i always found those magnets fun myself Titanium a very poetic response thank you for taking the time Ben Langhinrchs im glad it brought you such sensory satisfaction Shell thank you for the praise Carrie Burtt just so long as your not seeing me as a weed ty ;-) signed...bkm always important to have a little fun now and again ;-) Belinda Munoz hmm alphabet soup .. me thinks i feel another poem coming on ;-) senderupwords lol thats a lot of love to share ty Eric Alder lol i might well do that myself ;-) betweenhearts75 thank you i think it was more a case of it thought itself out though ;-) r3m3mb3rm3 are ya calling me old???? lol ;-) liv2write2day.. saved poem in normal type as jpg.. opened it in paint shop, used smug/smear tool at 100 percent then flood fill.... they do have a wave filter if you want a more polished look writersisland thank you i will give there a try too Leo thank you for your praise
Wow..this works on all levels, visual, meaning, wordplay, and the interplay of all. Good work!
ReplyDeletehow creative you play with the words - the colors - the shapes-as structure shifts to pattern - that's really cool!
ReplyDeleteI'm going to clal you the word magician -- the playful word magician. Good one.
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Indeed, works on many levels. Cool pic too! Glad you're back.
ReplyDeleteCreative play with words and color...love it!
ReplyDeleteLove it! Those colours certainly set the tone.
ReplyDeletevisually this is amazing...made me think of the letters we have on front of our fridge and playing with the boys teaching them to write...very nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteA word-dance in a rainbow of color and light... like a garden full of hibiscus in full bloom. Delightful!
ReplyDeleteI like when poetry engages us in different ways. This was like shape poetry plus color plus words. Cool!
ReplyDeleteColor always draws me in...Words keep me there. A visually interesting, clever combination of the two!
ReplyDeleteTruly visiually inviting to the ears...love this word garden!
ReplyDelete:-)
fun and clever one shot....bkm
ReplyDeleteAh, undulating indeed! Like alphabet soup, only more fun and poetic. Love it!
ReplyDeleteLove, love, love the way you wrote this. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteThat would look good on my refridgerator - LOL!
ReplyDeleteNice One Shot, Widow!
Love this display of such a wonderful write! Very artistic! :) Very well thought! ~April
ReplyDeletei havnt seen those in years!!! :)
ReplyDeleteHow did you do that...so unique. Good work.
ReplyDeleteVictoria
the presentation I think echoes the words :D the alphabet undulation :) lovely One Shot!
ReplyDeleteMy One Shot Poem - Morning Mist
so im a bit behind in my replys huh ;-) thank you all for taking the time to comment it is greatly appreciated
ReplyDeleteas always ty Beachanny
Claudia im glad you enjoyed
Glynn ahh but glyn if i waz a magition id find spellin so much eazier ;-)
dustus thank you for the wb i wasnt so much away as non responsive ;-)
SuziCate thank you for your kind words
KB hmm tone ... that i think is a missing element we will have to include in the future for a "complete" sensory piece
Brian Miller thank you i always found those magnets fun myself
Titanium a very poetic response thank you for taking the time
Ben Langhinrchs im glad it brought you such sensory satisfaction
Shell thank you for the praise
Carrie Burtt just so long as your not seeing me as a weed ty ;-)
signed...bkm always important to have a little fun now and again ;-)
Belinda Munoz hmm alphabet soup .. me thinks i feel another poem coming on ;-)
senderupwords lol thats a lot of love to share ty
Eric Alder lol i might well do that myself ;-)
betweenhearts75 thank you i think it was more a case of it thought itself out though ;-)
r3m3mb3rm3 are ya calling me old???? lol ;-)
liv2write2day.. saved poem in normal type as jpg.. opened it in paint shop, used smug/smear tool at 100 percent then flood fill.... they do have a wave filter if you want a more polished look
writersisland thank you i will give there a try too
Leo thank you for your praise