a selection of poetry
oh how tempting the spider to her fly...come into my web...just for a taste...nice one shot!
thank you :-) i couldnt decide on which one to use as my first post... but then i figured .. ahh there can only be one for my first ;-)
wow.. nice one shot.. i liked the opening verse a lot.. some nice imagery there especially, not that its not there in the rest of the poem, but there, it weaves a web of its own I felt :)My One Shot
Eerie One Shot - reminds me that Halloween is right around the corner!
Nice introduction, Tracey. This is a compelling and tight poem and all that tongueincheek imagery makes me shiver and smile. Good job. Thanks for posting. Gay (@beachanny)
I read this, and I want to run out the room. Inviting, sensual, suggestive, alluring -- and deadly. Nice one.
I love the suggestion of the spider being caught because she has to wait for her prey to come along. Very good.
Good choice for your 1st One Shot post! Welcome... I've been bitten by spiders, literally and metaphorically—not fun. lol As Gay said (@Beachanny) sense the layer of tongue-in-cheek. like the image too.
you wrote that so well i wanted to jump head first in and to hell with the consequences...a great one shot debut...cheers pete
Looks like you have enticed a few already. Good One shot
lol wow bigger response that i expected .. leo thank you for your kind words... eric ahh halloween iv got a few id like to post fer that ;-)...thanking thee beech, and thank you for letting me know about this group...lol glynn glad you enjoyed...ty kb appreciate the insight...dustus i hope my minions didnt hurt you too badly ;-)...lol pete, well i do always like to keep my larder full :-)...kkridge this does appear to be a very friendly group glad i introduced
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I'm A Spider https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pEK_jMSm6RY